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Preliminary Exercise Feedback and Learner Response

  1) Type up your teacher's feedback  in full . If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. Next Steps: I need to see your photos as soon as possible. These need to be present on both the front cover as well as on the inside section of your magazine. Whilst I do like the message behind your writing, remember, this is meant to be about an influencer of some kind that is promoting their new book on the issue you have chosen. For this, you need to pick a figurehead that can fill this role and will probably align with your cover image. I also believe that for the real magazine, you can take your own version of your makeup background that is far more effective and will benefit from being taken by yourself. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write  two  WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and  two  Next Step bullet points for your...

Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response

  1) Type up your feedback: a. What Mark and Grade did you get? 1/1 1/1 6/12 1/8 6/12 0/1 1/1 4/6 b. What targets were you given for the longer written questions?  link my ideas in my first paragraph to the brand. consider technical codes too camera and lighting etc. theory links actor/ setting choice. consider links to political/ royal contexts. 2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify  three  points that you could have referred to in your answer. Responses may demonstrate ability to analyse a media product using the theoretical framework (Media Language) by discussing: • Typography • Non-verbal codes verbal codes  3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main  narrative theories  and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP.  • The clear function of the narrative: to persuade people of the supe...

real statement of intent

The name of my magazine is "behind the seams". My target audience is young teenage girls who are being bullied in school and are struggling and wearing makeup and revealing clothes to hide their natural self. shes making this book to highlight that makeup and fashion doesn't define who you are and she made young people realise that wearing makeup isn't good and does not make you more popular its just makes you seem like a catfish.