Preliminary Exercise Feedback and Learner Response

 1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full. If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog.

Next Steps: I need to see your photos as soon as possible. These need to be present on both the front cover as well as on the inside section of your magazine. Whilst I do like the message behind your writing, remember, this is meant to be about an influencer of some kind that is promoting their new book on the issue you have chosen. For this, you need to pick a figurehead that can fill this role and will probably align with your cover image. I also believe that for the real magazine, you can take your own version of your makeup background that is far more effective and will benefit from being taken by yourself.


2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write two WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and two Next Step bullet points for your preliminary exercise. 

WWW: I think you’ve chosen a good theme/focus that speaks to key issues and a particular demographic focus. Your choice of magazine name is creative with the quote style of the headline working for this style of magazine. Your faded image is a good backdrop for the article written and the layout is a sensible one given the space.


3) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project? List three things you have learned or will do differently as a result of this exercise. You may want to comment on organisation, actors, filming, editing or something else entirely but be specific.

-get my images earlier 
-start it more earlier 
-put more effort in.

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